开头：

1. with the rapid development of society / economy / education / technology / culture / medical
2. it is of great necessity for youngster / students to improve our XXX.

------- 3. it is quite natural for us to ponder over the question of / that / whether

替换句

with the rapid developtment of
as the constant advancement of
in the fast pace world of
as the ever increasing pace of
with the continuous progress off
it is of great necessary of XX to XX it is essential for XX to XX it is crucited for XX to XX

第二段

4. first and foremost , there is no doubt that XX 5. based on big data , most of XX admitted that XX

it is obvious that it is clear that it goes without saying that no one can deny that most of = most majority of elites - scholars - professors - experts - there is growning studies have shown that recent studies have shown that there is growing consenses that authorities have asserted that

6.Futhermore ,it is obvious that 7.where there is , there are

8. last but no least, no one can deny that 9. although

尾段 1.in a world , the whole society should pay close attention to the problem of XX 2. only this way can we have a bright and promising future

替换 in the modern society in the modernized world with the graint leap of technology with the rapid globalizetion of modern a world,

观点选择型

  1. defferent students have different options upon graduation
  2. some think that XX is benificial , while others think XX is a better choice

引导

  1. i prefer the formar / latter
  2. the following reason can account for my preference

第二段

问题解决

how to address this problem? the following solutions can account for this phenomenon / issue

improve / enhance / promote

practice makes perfect

图表类

as is starkly mirrored (refflected) in the image/ chart that XX 图片的描述
,it is revealed that XX 内涵
the following reasons cna account this issue

this si that eh

名言警句类

as an old saying goes: XX . for us college students, it has na increasingly important significance: XXX : if you wnat to achieve something, you need to take time to do it . The following reasons can account ffor this issue.